“I tried to write poems like the songs they sang on Seventh Street,” Langston Hughes wrote in his autobiography, The Big Sea. “Their songs…had the pulse beat of the people who keep on going.”
Inspired by the blues music of the Harlem Renaissance, Hughes took its structure, sounds, and sentiments and put it on the page as poetry — blues poetry. One of the resulting poems is “Homesick Blues,” which expresses his longing for the South and a desire to go home. In the poem, Hughes writes in a southern dialect, heightening the sense nostalgia and giving readers a concrete way to look through the poet’s eyes.
Studying the Blues
In February, students at Krste Petkov Miskov studied “Homesick Blues” as part of the Dreams and Friendship topic, My Language. We discussed Hughes’ use of dialect and its effect. We also learned about blues music and how Hughes imitated the music he was hearing around him in the structure, diction, and subject matter of “Homesick Blues.”
We began our research by noticing that each stanza of “Homesick Blues” has six lines that follow the same pattern: A-B-A-B-C-D. In other words, the first two lines repeat an idea and the last two lines finish the thought. We also observed that lines B and D always rhymed. This structure, we discussed, is the same as the typical three-line blues stanza, but instead of writing three long lines, Hughes split each line in half, perhaps to suggest a certain musicality like where to put a pause or place emphasis.
Next, we listened to some blues, both old and new(er)— Bessie Smith, Arthur Crudup, Albert Collins, Muddy Waters, B.B. King, and Stevie Ray Vaughn. In a few songs, we discovered the ubiquitousness of the three line blues stanza for ourselves. We also noted common language conventions, like dropping the g in words that end with –ing, and made a list of the words and phrases we heard a lot, like Lawd, yes, yeah, you know, well, etc., noting their usage as fillers that often show up at the beginning of a line.
As we listened, we talked about how the blues often, but not always, expresses sad — or “blue” — feelings. We came up with this list of common blues themes based on our listening selection:
- Pride
- Good/Hard times
- Trouble with love
- Traveling
- Weather/Natural disasters
After our research, we were excited to find that “Homesick Blues,” with its southern dialect, traveling theme, and sad tone, fit neatly into our findings.
Writing the Blues
To begin the process of writing our own blues poems, groups of students came up with a title for each of the five common blues themes. Here are some of the titles students came up with:
Love Is Trouble
Going Back Home
I’m Gonna Party
Lawd, I’m Proud of Myself
Traveling with My Honey
Sweet Party with Ace and Pajto
Love Me Baby Again
Come Back Good Times
Sweet Sunny Days
Finally, students were given the challenge to chose one of their titles and write one to three stanzas of a blues poem. Here are a few of the gems:
Have Me a Boat
by Filip B. and Teodora H.
I have me a boat/Yeah, it’s beautiful an’ mine/Yeah, I have me a boat/Yes, it’s beautiful an’ mine/It’s like a stripe of rainbow/Like a cloud in the sky.
It sparkles like a star/Like the sun in the sky/Yes, It sparkles like a star/Like the sun in the sky/I got me a boat/Everyone wants my boat, to buy
My boat is the best/An’ the story ends here/Yeah, my boat is the best/And the story ends here/I really love my boat because/It’s gonna take me somewhere
~•~
Baby, I Know English
by Andrej F.
Hey, baby, I know English/It’s so easy I know/Hey, baby, I know English/It’s so easy I know/Got so many words/You got to take it slow
Hey, baby, I know English/It’s so easy I know/Hey, baby, I know English/It’s so easy I know/It has so many words/It’s so easy you should know
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My Family Is the Best
by Mihail T., Nikola N., Filip T., and Besim B.
My family is the best/Yes, they love me so/My family is the best/You know, they love me so/They love me to the moon and back/Yeah, my family is the best and I know
They care about me/The love me so/Yeah, they care about me/Yeah, they love me so/They send me a warm kiss/They love me to the moon and back and I know
~•~
I’m Gonna Help Ma Brother
by Andrej B.
I’m gonna help ma brother/Who walks the streets deep in night/Yeah, I’m gonna help ma brother/Who walks the streets in the night/He sings and dances for money/Just to do his family right
The good Lawd will bless you/If you help our brothers out/You know, the good Lawd will bless you/You gotta help our brothers out/Because one day they can help us/Sweet Lawd, without a doubt
We’re all people livin’ on Earth/Who can help brothers without luck/I said, we’re all people who can help on Earth/Help brothers who ain’t got luck/If you can make one person happy/Who can’t give a brother a buck
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